tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3727181806679003267.post2905329743995591478..comments2022-04-08T12:57:26.584-05:00Comments on Phoenixanew: I Wrote This?! - a series reviewing my older writing - Unfinished drow storyUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3727181806679003267.post-2557767173102793392015-08-07T16:12:17.078-05:002015-08-07T16:12:17.078-05:00As someone who’s never read this universe before, ...As someone who’s never read this universe before, I thought you did a good job of making things clear and dropping me in without leaving me confused. There’s some really nice writing in here, and it did pull me in and left me wanting to see where it would go, so congrats on that account. :) Criticism side, a few clunky lines, I got a little jumbled on some characters (though that’s largely me as NoelCThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01744014386233716741noreply@blogger.com